Thursday, 14 May 2020
writing week 5
hi welcome back to the second blog of today. This week for writing I had to watch for videos on what makes a good short piece of writing. After watching the videos needed to make our own short but good piece of writing on a picture We saw. The picture that I saw was a giant octopus coming out of the water and attacking a building. Off of that picture I based my story at Bondi Beach and instead of having a octopus attack the beach I had a king shark. We had to use a planning template to play now piece of writing here's a photo
after finish the planning I went and started writing the story the story had to be between 250 and 300 words Maestro was 261 words long. Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed.
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