I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, 3 August 2018
traditions
Our learning Focus for Term 3 project Based learning is about family culture learning in my family tradition is sport we all play sport i play rugby. I play for Burnside because my Dad and my Grandad played for it to. My family is form New Zealand . We also go camping every year with the same people. and those are my family traditions.
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ReplyDeleteHi Lincoln. playing rugby for the same club as your dad and grandad is a very special tradition. It made me think of a tradition in our family about St Bede's College. My husband Stephen went to St Bedes and so did his father and then so did our son Kieran. This is three generations like your family. I like your camping picture, do you stay in a tent or a cabin?
ReplyDeleteTena koe Lincoln, The part that stood out for me was the amazing photo of camping. Is that really your camp as it looks like a very cool space? Did you know I used to spend many hours camping at lake Benmore when I was growing up? Next time I would recommend you getting Google Read Write to read your sentences back to you as this will help you fix any mistakes you have made. Great work, nga mihi, Mark
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ReplyDeletei liked you comment Lincoln so inspirational.
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ReplyDeleteHello I really like you writing.but next time you should put capital when you write I.
ReplyDeleteHi Lincoln. I really like your term 3 project base on family learning. How long did It take for you to do? Why did you do it? Do you like camping? Next time you could put more full stops in and you could make it a little bit more interesting.
ReplyDeleteHI Lincoln, I like your story because it is talking about your family traditions and what you do with your family. I thought you used good words to choose for the sentence and the right punctuation. Maybe next time you could look at your writing and editing it so it is correct, put capitals at the start of sentences.
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